I’m really late posting today, but that’s because today was pretty busy. I’d like to say thanks for everyone’s comments on my previous poems! Hopefully, I’ll write some more stuff that’s actually worth reading :D. That said, today’s poem is also really short. It’s for everybody who’s reaching for a dream that people say they’ll never achieve.
The Star
I’m reaching
For the highest star
The one that holds the key
To Neverland and beyond
I can feel the heat
On my fingertips
But I just can’t reach it
–
You laugh when you see me
Straining on my tip-toes
And you ask me if I think
The star will fall
Because that’s the only way
I’ll catch it
–
I’m not stopping
I’m still reaching
No matter what you say
Because just the sparkling warmth
Of being so close
Is enough to keep my dream alive
And a smile on my face
keep reaching…
beautifully done!
very cute,
well done poem!
nice – great motivation to others wanting to keep their dream alive
aptly worded superbly expressed..
hang in there mate.. keep the hope burning 🙂
you shall reach it someday 🙂
I’m here from Jingle’s Rally
you can check my poem at
http://megzone.wordpress.com/2010/06/03/thursday-poets-rally-obsession/
Lovely poem.
really well done!
A sweet verse from a smiling heart– well done!
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