Before I get to today’s poem, I need to make a very special announcement. This week in Jingle’s poetry rally, I was nominated by Jingle for the Perfect Poet Award and now I am very honored to say that I was awarded it. As per the acceptance rules, here is the award (below) and my nomination for next week is none other than the amazing Jingle. Here is a poem from Jingle –> http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/06/16/thursday-poets-rally-week-23-poem-post-perfect-poet-award-acceptance/
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/06/18/the-perfect-poet-award-4-thursday-poets-rally-week-23/
Now, for today’s poem, I was reading all these poems about people’s lives and it was really depressing! So I set out to write a poem based on my feelings about my life that were POSITIVE! And here it is:
My Life
The sun is shining
The birds are singing
A gentle breeze is blowing
And as I look out the window
I smile when I realize
It’s one of those mornings
I can’t believe this is my life
There are cookies downstairs
A whole plate full
In the shape of a daisy
With raspberry jelly in the middle
I ate three for breakfast
With my mom’s permission
I can’t believe this is my life
I’m going hiking today
Up just one of the mountains
That cover my area
And it’s hotter than an oven
But the view will be worth it
Besides, my friends will be with me
I can’t believe this is my life
It’s one of those days
Where the darkest teenager
Couldn’t find a thing to complain about
There’s sparkles dancing on the water
And not a cloud in the sky
And not a frown to be seen for miles
Yeah, this is my life
oh, dear!
you are so sweet.
your poem is perfect…
I am afraid that I am not perfect, I apologized in my post a few minutes ago..
I thank you for thinking of me.
😉
Lovely poem, loved it 🙂
That was so sweet:) Loved it.
🙂
We should remember to think of what we DO have in life that is good, great, and a blessing. Very nice, going againt the trend of writing about everything that has gone wrong in life, I like it.
When I read this I felt like an innocent child making innocent confession about his/her life… Wonderful 🙂
wow!
A day to cherish… thanks for writing a poem about it.
aaawwww…such a sweet and fun poem 🙂
yep indeed this is life..
i wonder why in the nitty gritties we forget to appreciate the wonderful life that we have 😀
lovely poem dear
here from Jingle’s Rally
you can check my poem at
http://megzone.wordpress.com/2010/07/01/thursday-poets-rally-footboard-traveller/
wonderful poem! i am glad i got to read it today… 🙂
thanks for the smiles…a lot of positives in this one…and any day hiking for me is definitely a good day!
What delightful poem made me feel good all over.
Joanny
Yup, a nice positive poem. I like the repetition of ‘I can’t believe..’
Life is GOOOOOD! Great poem!
Just Say’n
Lovely, sunny, positive poem. It’s the little details that make it so nice. Good work!
Love this! Appreciation is the the best feeling in the world!
perfect poem for a sunny day or when its raining to turn it sunny…loved it:)
http://hoiden.wordpress.com/2010/07/04/journal-entry-101/
very beautiful
A great, POSITIVE poem! Well done!
http://itistimetothinkformyself.blogspot.com/2010/07/i-silently-sing-along-idyl.html
I accepted your nomination!
thank you for the fun!
Happy Monday!
what a beautiful poem, written with gratitude of life’s simple blessings.. i love this! 🙂
Thanks for the upbeat poem. Sometimes in the darkness its hard to see the light.
Nice poem & I understood a beautiful day of your life without a cloud, only sun shine! Good work!
wow! what a beautiful day and what an amazing life. hope you always see it this way 🙂