This is my entry for the Monday Poetry Potluck over here: http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2010/10/poetry-potluck-love-and-romance.html!
Where Are You?
I see you in my dreams
My love
I see you when I wake
I hear you in the radio’s songs
And the trills of the birds in the trees
I know all of your favorite things
And just what you love about me
I understand your moods
And all your little quirks
I can tell when you are holding back a laugh
And the tears you hate to have fall
I know everything about you
And you know everything about me
I see you in my dreams
My love
I see you when I wake
Now all you need to do
My love
Is enter reality
magical, ideal, dreamy love?
perfect love in your work.
beautifully done.
Great love,
Person sees, listens, feels the loved one everywhere.
Nice reflection of love
Beautiful–captured that whole feeling of the perfect, long-term love, knowing all, feeling all, sharing all. Divine. Well done!
wow! nice jolt to reality haha!
Beautiful reflection and so full of imagery my friend. Well done xoxoxox Biggest hugs xx